Inaugural
Blueberries rolling tongues like a snake charmer
Oranges and lips and pulp and juice
Lust for life keeps us alive
Beasts magnifying into books with no covers
Magic mushrooms alluring your intellect
Tantalising grips and the roses blossom;
thorns shedding like autumn
Volcanos in icelands erupting to shift cosmos
Snow icy showering nailed to foggy glass walls
Plums are bouncy onto pillows
Silver slivers curled in your sheets
Coffee and whites and beans spilling
Little by little, woman
Call me your muse
While I paint you adorning your skin
Stallin' fallin'
fellin' soarin'
Chemically bond, break em chromes
Proximity shifting feelings
The untameable invincible indomitable tamed vincible domitable Saggitarius. ☂️
An unparallel orchestra of unrelated word,the dynamic use of vocabulary and poetic devices,the rhyme scheme which allures you to guess it's validity plus the masterful application of vividly twisted imagery does almost turn this piece into a symphony, the last line deftly serving as the crescendo.
ReplyDeleteThat analysis into a piece by no one has gotten it more value than it deserves. Obliged sir.
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